My dandavats to you Sriman Uddharan dasa.
To be brutally honest, Lilavati Devi and I think the article by Jagadananda Prabhu is a difficult read even with your corrections.
As Lilavati said “it is not succinct enough and doesn’t flow.”
A little “bombastic” I would add.
Then, following the line of being “brutally honest”, I don’t see how you could have written this to me just three days before (4/14/20), which pertained to the same article:
A few typos corrected otherwise okay.
Please explain how there could be such a vast disparity in your opinion.
Also, I had written to you:
Attached below please find “COVID-19_ The Krishna Karuna Virus” as edited by you with my additional remarks.
Please look them over. If you disagree with any of them, please let me know why so that I may reconsider.
In your reply you did not say if you agreed or disagreed with my corrections. In particular, I wonder if my attempts at correcting Jd’s grammar were on target or not, since that was one of my worst subjects in school. It seemed to me Jd made extensive use of independent clauses that were in the form of sentences but were disconnected from the subject, which was contained in a previous sentence.… Read More...